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Sirez Ananova Crewmember
Joined: 15 Feb 2008 Posts: 14
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Posted: Sun Mar 02, 2008 9:51 pm Post subject: Sirez's edits |
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Alright, I need you guys' opinion on something.
This is a screenshot I tinkered around with in Photoshop
And this is the same screenshot unedited
Which one do you like better? And are there any critiques on what I can do to improve the first? |
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Gookin Aggregator First Mate
Joined: 21 Oct 2005 Posts: 1889 Location: United Kingdom
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Posted: Sun Mar 02, 2008 10:45 pm Post subject: |
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Not too bad Sirez. I find that photoshop work is all a matter of personal gain, what you've got here is an excellent starting point. All I can suggest is that you perhaps try dodgin and burning techniques to enhance shadows and highlights. As for anything else, it is merely learning more about the program and understanding what effects can make for an uber-screenie. _________________
You always say just what everyone else is thinking don't you? - Pixelmad |
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Sirez Ananova Crewmember
Joined: 15 Feb 2008 Posts: 14
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Posted: Mon Mar 03, 2008 12:33 am Post subject: |
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Some great advice there, Gookin. I should kick myself for neglecting such tools.
Before
And after
Not all that pleased with the shading on the shirt, but it's something to improve upon at least. I'm pleased with the halo effect and the highlights in general, though. |
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d4sh Faction Leader, Antares Captain
Joined: 11 May 2005 Posts: 3882 Location: The Antares
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Posted: Mon Mar 03, 2008 2:46 pm Post subject: |
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Quick learner, nice going on the dodge & burn.
My personal most important thing is the setting of the image. Especially when incorporating text I want the whole thing to make sense, be balanced and focused on what matters in the image. _________________
"d4sh is half robot, half Dutch and half ninja." - M0RGAN | "Dashy is hardcore, he danced in the flames." - Gookin |
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Neurosia Antares Crewmember
Joined: 10 Feb 2007 Posts: 194 Location: Who knows?!?!
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Posted: Mon Mar 03, 2008 11:25 pm Post subject: |
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Quick learner indeed. Nice work. Just work on the finesse; blurring and smudging particularly.
Also, I agree with Dash, the setting and atmosphere of the image is the most important thing. You don't have to do a collosal amount of editing work if you have a good eye for placement. Some of the most subtle edits create the most powerful effects in an image. _________________
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Sirez Ananova Crewmember
Joined: 15 Feb 2008 Posts: 14
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Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2008 12:26 am Post subject: |
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Thanks for the crits and compliments guys, I'll definitely keep at it, as I'm relatively new to the screenshot editing scene. I'll keep this thread updated with my work as it gets done.
Really appreciate the tips too, they're all very helpful to me.
Two new ones:
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